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Post by dani. on Sept 30, 2005 15:19:57 GMT -5
Hello people. Here in this thread we will post songs, poetry etc. that we have written or seen. They can be any kind: funny, depressing, gloomy, any kind will do. I will now post a song that I have written. It's called Insight and Kriptonite. I know the title sounds like a ripoff of a Green Day song. My mom read it and then she asked me why it was so gloomy. she'll never learn. I wrote this song after listening and watching Bob Dylan all day and I hope that it reflects that:
It was a hard road to cross, then Torn from the inside. Never turning back. Tryin fill in wat thay lack.
Once that door was opened, Oh, wat a game we played. Searching, finding, not knowing, What was really said.
I'm sorry I'm noy want you wanted, I'm sorry that i'm not wat u needed. After things were said and done, I didn't need u anyway.
It just goes to show you, things are not wat they seem. Just hold on to your ounce of truth, and hold on to that dream.
Death is so overrated, the end is near don't fear. you ask, "where is the world going?" the ending is very clear.
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Post by Jenny on Sept 30, 2005 15:27:49 GMT -5
Wow. That. Was. Deep. And good! I liked it! This is sort of strange to post after that, but it rhymes.
-clears throat- Don't let the doorknob hit ya where the good Lord split ya.
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Post by dani. on Sept 30, 2005 15:31:00 GMT -5
lol, where'd ya hear that one?
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Post by Jenny on Sept 30, 2005 15:32:43 GMT -5
Somewhere, I forgot. Didn't I ruin the mood?
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Post by dani. on Sept 30, 2005 15:39:23 GMT -5
no, did i set the mood?
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Post by rainyfranky on Sept 30, 2005 22:04:25 GMT -5
dude! as i said b4 i lurv it!
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Post by dani. on Oct 3, 2005 17:12:55 GMT -5
Thanks guys! But I've lost my inspration. so i'll have to wait till I find another one so I can write another song. Whispers-I bet a few pix of Ville would help.whispers-
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Post by dani. on Oct 3, 2005 18:04:53 GMT -5
Right now, I am learning to play "What's Up" by the 4 non Blondes. It's really easy, just 4 chords. A, D, and Bmin.[wait that's 3 chords.] It's a very insprational song.
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Post by dani. on Oct 21, 2005 18:41:15 GMT -5
I hate to double post, but I'm be getting a guitar for Xmas!
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Post by rainyfranky on Oct 21, 2005 18:42:17 GMT -5
really!!!! I'm getting my own bass! teehee!!!
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Post by Jenny on Oct 21, 2005 18:44:16 GMT -5
Umm............ I don't know what I'm getting! -giggle, giggle-
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Post by dani. on Oct 21, 2005 18:46:22 GMT -5
why did u giggle?
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Post by rainyfranky on Oct 21, 2005 19:32:22 GMT -5
BEcUUUUUse giggleing is FuuuuuNNN!!!!!
whoah!... I'm a tweed bit too hyper for no appaerent reasone!!!!!!! & it sucks cus I can't spell!!!!
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Post by Its Dani on Oct 23, 2005 19:46:25 GMT -5
Well, I don't giggle! *b/c idk how to* I only laugh out loud!
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Post by rainyfranky on Oct 26, 2005 16:44:20 GMT -5
lol!!!!!
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